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Artist's Comments
If you're going to critique her please critique the coloring because...
EDIT: Even for not caring about the BG I still thought it was filth so went with a transparent BG So I finally had a moderately slow day of work and decided to pass those sloooooow times with coloring this lovely lineart by `hizuki24 Well, I hope you enjoy her ^_^ Mike Loli Lineart by `hizuki24 Comments
The hair is awesome. <3
Well it's green so... that is a plus, obviously. -- Why thank you Andy
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And yes, seriously. Every time someone asks me what color they should use for hair, I always say green. -- Oh yes! Though it's kinda weird how green hair in real life is blarghish
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Critiques
Ok, so let's aim for the coloring, shall we?
I like the way the soft/bright colors get along so well OwO d The clothings' ones couldn't be any better
Now, the shading on the clothes is soft, suggesting a nice comfy indumentary
On the matter of the highlights, there's not much to say :3 The ones on the hair look splendid, but maybe a little too obvious, if you get my point. Maybe trying to make it zig-zag shaped?
About the shoes highlights all I've got to say is that they look a little 'out-of-lightsourse'. According to what I see when I look at this, dood, I can tell lights coming from the top-left, however, her right shoe tells me otherwise
Overall - Good paintin!
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