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If you're going to critique her please critique the coloring because...

:star:I did not draw this!:star: <

EDIT: Even for not caring about the BG I still thought it was filth so went with a transparent BG :nod:

So I finally had a moderately slow day of work and decided to pass those sloooooow times with coloring this lovely lineart by `hizuki24 :D It was fun to color and I tried a few new things out (like different colors for the shades and stuff).

Well, I hope you enjoy her ^_^

Mike

Loli Lineart by `hizuki24

Critiques


:iconwapy:
Aww doood, I'm going to make a critic! :lol:

Ok, so let's aim for the coloring, shall we? :plotting:

:bulletblue: Color Choice:
I like the way the soft/bright colors get along so well OwO d The clothings' ones couldn't be any better :aww: Although I think that, if you're willing to evolve more in later artworks (which a background by that time, I presume), I'd suggest some less saturated colors (and I'm speaking specifically of the hair :3

:bulletblue: Shading:
Now, the shading on the clothes is soft, suggesting a nice comfy indumentary :aww: I specially like the way they're darker on the back! :D And they also seem to fit the colors you've chosen well :giggle:

:bulletblue: Highlights:
On the matter of the highlights, there's not much to say :3 The ones on the hair look splendid, but maybe a little too obvious, if you get my point. Maybe trying to make it zig-zag shaped? :confused: However, it still looks good on this :3
About the shoes highlights all I've got to say is that they look a little 'out-of-lightsourse'. According to what I see when I look at this, dood, I can tell lights coming from the top-left, however, her right shoe tells me otherwise :giggle: But that's a minor thing now :giggle:

Overall - Good paintin! :w00t:
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:iconhellobaby:
so nice to see ur work again :XD:, ur coloring is cool:love:

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:icondamaged927:
Aww, Thank you Amy :hug:

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:icondemaulwurfn:
The hair is awesome. <3

Well it's green so... that is a plus, obviously. :iconhappycriesplz:

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:icondamaged927:
Why thank you Andy :bow: And yes, I agree! Green hair is pretty fantastic :iconhappycriesplz:

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:icondamaged927:
Thank you kindly ^_^

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:icondemaulwurfn:
You are most welcome, Mike. :iconteheplz:

And yes, seriously. Every time someone asks me what color they should use for hair, I always say green. :noes:

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Oh yes! Though it's kinda weird how green hair in real life is blarghish :shrug:

Do you like the new :happycry:?

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:iconfelicia-val:
it looks very good :D gotta love green ^^
:iconlannako:
Great coloring, the hair and the eyes are especially awesome! :D

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